Filter Words
Filter Words! Filter words are those unnecessary words that filter the readers experience from a character’s point of view. Words to Look For: To see to hear to think to touch to wonder to realize to watch to look to seem to feel (or feel like) can to decide to sound (or sound like) to know What you might write: Sarah felt a sinking feeling as she realized she’d forgotten her purse back at the cafe across the street. She heard the impatient honk of horns and wondered how she could quickly cross the busy road before someone took off with her bag. But the traffic seemed impenetrable, and she decided to run to the intersection at the end of the block. By eliminating the bolded words, it removes the filter that distances the readers from the character’s experiences. What to write instead: Sarah’s stomach sank. Her purse- she’d fo...